This is a sad poem but still really good. Keep writing cause they are so awesome not lying lol. nothing needed improved on whatsoever. YOU ARE TRUELY GOOD AT THIS!:)

Wow...litterally that's all I can say! lol That was amazing and i look forward to reading more of your poems! awesome! please rate and comment mine!
~Love and Trust

Hey this is really good!! so you have a band? thats cool i play drums but yeah great job keep it up!!
p.s
read my poems and plz rate me....thanx so much
~kayla~