Comments : The Saddest Moment Of My Life (Acrostic)

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammi

    This is amazing I love it and it so well writing and it just captured me I just could not stop reading it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Yuna

    I think it is very hard to write a poem according to the alphabet AND have it sound and look good. I think you did super with this poem and I am very impressed! Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Thanks for the message! I humbly accept your friendship! You have terrific poems yourself! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    I'm in the process of trying to write one of these.
    It isn't working.
    But I love the idea alot.

    I loved how you used the "x" which is really hard to place in a sentence.

    [[Xylophones played a sad tune as he left,]]

    Well done. :]

    "

  • 17 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    Awww. soo sweet and yet sad.. I loved the smotions that I felt from this poem.. I really hope you stop writing.. becasue I will be happy to read more of your poems.... very good.. keep up the good work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Oh wow O_O a very unique Acrostic poem :) just like the others said from above X is a hard letter..

    Anyway It flowed nicely.

    My favorite line would be..
    Keep loving me back!
    ^^ I love the emotions in it ;)

    Keep up the good work.