Comments : Screeching tires, screaming breakes

  • 17 years ago

    by Darci

    Kinda sad and scary.
    but i like it. good job.
    -Darci-

  • 17 years ago

    by ShadowedEyesLie

    I like the way you wrote this. Kind of leaves you in a sort of questioning, wondering feeling.

  • 17 years ago

    by amanda flood

    Wow you really do have a way of putting your words together well done