I'm really glad you have the love you do, and it seems you appreciate it. Never take love for granted because you'll never know when it'll be all over forever. Great poem, very heart felt and filled with emotion 5/5

Oh god, how cute.........
this is another great love poem by you that shows you are really a caring and a sweet person, i wish someone could write me like this, im jeolus,lol.
great job once again and keep up the great work

Awwww that poem is soo cute, happy your in love

amazing poem

brittany (MD)

Awhh, that was so sweeet. I love how much emotion you put into it. The flow was good as were the descriptions but the emotion really stood out. Its also good that you made it flow without a rhyme scheme, some writers find this very hard to do. Lovey job 5/5

Hey, i liked the rhyme scheme you have going in this poem, the secound and fourts line iun each stanza rhyming. That works well. I also like your 4 stanza, 4 line structure, this was good. Its a very sweet topic, i dont usually read love poems so im not exactly sure how im meant to comment so for that i apologise. The flow was ok. I again disliked how you ended each line with a ful stop. Maybe try somehting different next time you write? But keep writing as you have got talent! Thank you for your comment. xx

Very capturing and interesting love.
but im sure everything you have to give is enough; if it isnt than this love is not meant to be. good luck :D
5/5

You are so lucky to have someone in you life that you can hold onto. This is a wonderful poem. The flow was wonderful and the rhyming was great. 5/5

Kalee

This poem seems more developed at the end. Perhaps you could go backand edit to make the beginning that way too. I like the passion in this poem though, so 5/5.

*what a really sweet poem. =] i gave it a 4/5 though. i liked the passion and your words within the poem. the flow was alright but it was mainly how you described such a feeling that was beautiful. good job.

such a simple line but i loved it "I'd do anything in this world that you want me to."

-Lith[x]

Its beautiful. these are my favorite types of poems, the ones that describe the love that people are feeling for someone when they wrote it, so overflowing with emotion. And this is deffinetaly overflowing with emotion. Beautiful, keep it up.

Amazing, sweet poem :D Very interesting, the flow was off a little bit but still 5/5 :D