I love it, very deep and powerful yet it maintains that pleasant, calm read.

This poem was well written. Few filler words, great rhyming scheme, and the flow was amazing. The syllable count in each line was set up brilliantly and connected well with the previous line and the line after it. Great write. 5/5.

Great imagery. Very powerful and great flow. Love the wording. Your poems are really good. 5/5

This poem, is by far, completley unique to what I have read, I don't think I've come across a poem like this, and I like it for that fact. I have a habit of writing cliche, but I guess thats because I like cliche things, so its just my opinion. And I'm not normally one for extremely unique things, but I really like this. At first when I read it, I wasn't quite sure of what the poem was about, but then in the second verse, I finally came to realize what the poem was about haha.

'Is there a star for that one wish?
Or am I simply being childish?'

I like the first line, however I think this seems a bit like a forced rhyme, man, im being completley hypocriticle here, i know doll, haha. Butyes, I know that you wanted it to rhyme, because sometimes thats what I do, but I don't think I could of thoguht of another line to replace that myself anyway.

'Or is there more than the eye can see,
A tiny window that lets my heart believe'

i like this, strong, simple, and a real nice ending to the poem.

welldone.
kaitlynx.

This is a good write, i personaly believe that every wish needs a shooting star, or a penny in a well.
symbols for things we hope for. (:

tom/5

Beautiful write, this is what I sort of meant. I hope you can see the difference between this poem, and the first poem I commented. There was detail in this poem, but it was written well, without having to excessively use pronouns. The flow and rhyme scheme were also great, and the content was sweet. I really liked the ending of this one, because it gives a lot of hope. Good job on this poem.

Amazing poem. I really loved this poem. It is very well written. The flow was great. Your a really good writer, I wish i was good like you lol. well done. 5/5

~Chelsea

I love it, excellent, a very nice title, and i loved the style you used, excellent work, keep it up.

Your choice of words is very beautiful. The flow of all of your poems is great and makes them even more powerful and breath-taking. Great job! 5/5 <3 <3

~Kayla~