Killed Me With A Fantasy. [Acrostic]

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Apr 10, 2007


Killing me with your words from the
Inside out, this fantasy of the perfect
Love has played with my head for the
Last time. And when you told me forever,
Everyone knew but me what those
Damn words actually

Meant. So if forever has to
End tonight, than when

Will eternity play it's part? Because
I always thought forever and eternity were
The same thing, but with this fantasy in my
Head playing over and over of me

And you, it's hard to tell what it means.

Falling down on my knees, I beg for you
And your heart - baby, you know that
Neither of us actually meant
Those words we said. But in all
Actuality, I can still
See myself, heart beating against my skin, laying in
Your arms tonight with an I love you pressed on your lips.

-Jenna. Elphick
April 9, 2007

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Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same
words as in the title.

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  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Nice, M'dear.
    Not that much to say, overall, flawless.

    5/5
    ~Stephen White

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Very good acrostic jenna, i love this style, and you did very good, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by 19Rusty

    Thank you, and good poem.