Darlin.. my heart aches for you as I read this, I know this pain. I know the agony of "walking away and pretending not to love someone" I loved reading this because its real, and its a window into your heart. Keep putting your feelings down, let them take a life of their own and tell your story. Good job.
As always your... "Hopeless Romantic" tom

Very sad poem. Very touching. Love hurts so bad so many times. The emotion can be felt in your write. Great job!

What am I fighting for
I don't really understand
You're not there anymore
To simply hold my hand

This stanza says it all.
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

This is such sad and heartfelt write, emotions of lost love reflects so clearly in each lines.

I would wait a lifetime
For a moment with you
But not knowing when I'll see you
Tears me up in two

Loves this stanza, it shows your hope and love together.5/5

Take care dear.
Chavii

This was so heartbreaking...the emotion behind the words is clear.
The flow was good throughout, the imagery used was good.
I hope you are okay!

Wow I can really really relate to this at the moment. Wonderfully written and it flows beautifully. 5/5

Hey this was a really sad write. lot of emotion, very touching poem. good job expressing urself. xx

A heartfelt write, full of emotion. Love can be so many things and cause our hearts to feel many emotions......

Aww, this one reads like it was straight from the heart.
Your poems are always pieces that everyone can relate to or has been in similar situations before..
Well done on this piece, it's very well written
5/5
*Gem*

Very sad and heartfelt emotions in this piece....good flow and rhyming. 5/5 Debbie

Wow this is very sad and soooo deep, such a great poem A+ as a matter of fact 5/5

This is really deep, and i loved every bit of it. Excellent flow and amazing rhyming, good job keep it up.

Best Wishes
Wallace

I guess so many people could relate to what you have expressed here. There is a stage in almost every relation when things start going this way, it could be just a phase of relation or boredom but steps are important to be taken asap. "just my point of view"

really liked the poem

all the best and take care

It is really amazing i did pass wiz zis to im so depressed but it really explain what is hapening wiz me:(