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by RainbowSlider Apr 10, 2007 category : Nature, environment / nature
Swimming in a sea of space Used to be such a lonely place. But as long as I can see the sun I feel I can touch everyone. The nights were so very lonely Thinking of being with you only. Space is like this big ocean That you can barely feel motion. Blue cruiser dreams take me away Where the tides and waves play. Blue cruiser dreams help me see The beauty of nature so free. Passing by the Milky Way I hear what the dolphins say. The whales sing me to sleep And I feel space so very deep. Blue cruiser dreams guide me on So I can still look at awe upon The life so infinite in display As we take a calm rest today.
by Isabella
Rythmic flow. Exeptionel concret methaphores. 5/5
by Wallace
Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. PS. Plz rate and comment on some of my poems and I'll return the favour.