Unfinished

by Alan   Apr 10, 2007


Full of rage, and desperate hate,
He pulled the trigger and finished his fate
He ended it right then and there
With one final blow, and one final flare
He did not think before he shot
He did not think of what he had clot
Just one split second caused all these tears
That stupid action leaked pain for years
His life was going to be filled with things he yet had to do,
But now he can't fufill his dreams,all thanks to you
He must not have known, or was in a strife
For why else would he have taken my life
Now i'm unfinished, and now im torn
and theres nothing left of me to mourn

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  • 17 years ago

    by lostsoul13

    That was an awesome poem. it may be sad but thats what makes it good. keep it up!!

  • 17 years ago

    by xfAdInGxaWaYx

    Oh thats sad. Great poem though 5/5