This Necklace

Could of been a little longer.
But it was good.
Nice job.
5/5

~Chelsea

This poem is a bit confusing, but it's probably just me. I understand the concept, though. Or I understand it to some degree. I've interpreted it as not -really- knowing someone, but loving them anyway. Brilliant.

I thought this was really cute for something you wrote when you were 12. I didnt like the repetition of him though it seemed a little forced but that doesnt really matter because the meaning behind this was very cute! well done ~mel

This is actually really good. It's short but it flows well and you had a point to it and it did make sense so well done.

Him him him. love love love. so very nice. i like how you repeated a bit about the heading.

5/5 again David