by Tracy D Rollings Apr 10, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
If i didn't have you |
by Ya----Na
Some Beautiful writing, I am seeing here and because of the love you poured through out the poem. |
A most enjoyable tribute to the one you love. U liked wet much the rhyming and the way the reasoning if if I can't have you refrain showed all the ways life wouldn't work without your love and then in the final stanza the reveal - the happy ending because you do have your love. Loved it. Milly x |
by Hebe
What a sweet poem! |
by Cindy
Amazing poem...i loved it...very welll written...great job... ~*~Cindy~*~ |
by Candy
WOW! This poem is so beautiful! I dedicate this poem of yours to my sister without her I'd be nothing! Keep up the great job! |