The love in this poem. oh it was so clear and strong! i loved it. whoever it is, plz don't go either. cause i don't want you to feel any pain kalee.

5/5 david

I give this a 4 out of 5 because of the emotion behind it i found that to be nicely written but i dont know i cant give it a 5 sorry hun. Good effort tho. ~mel

Yet another wonderfully mind boggling piece. That's a lot to feel at 12. I was still taping up pictures of Harry Potter at that age. XD So, you were definately a bit more mature than me. Great job.

I like this poem alot. Nice job. 5/5

~Chelsea

Ah that "missing" feeling is never good. tis a tad sad really :(

I feel you on this one. not bad for age 12 5/5