by LadyPearl Apr 10, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
I use to draw pictures of tall skyscrapers reaching |
Overall this was a good poem. The flow was off a bit. |
Ahh. Downvoters. Looks like you have some admirers. [They're only jealous, remember that.] |
by Kurt
I don't know what to say. It has promise. Although I agree it isn't a 1-3. I'd say that it is 4/5 because the flow was off, and the uncertain rhyme scheme seemed to take away from the read. However, it was a good write, and I did enjoy reading it. |