I don't know what to say. It has promise. Although I agree it isn't a 1-3. I'd say that it is 4/5 because the flow was off, and the uncertain rhyme scheme seemed to take away from the read. However, it was a good write, and I did enjoy reading it.

Ahh. Downvoters. Looks like you have some admirers. [They're only jealous, remember that.]

This is very good. Heartfelt, warm, sweet . . . everything a beautiful poem needs. I loved the ending, very . . . erm, sorry, lacking words here.

However, I must say it's not YOUR best, but of course, it is much better than most poems [=).] Um, the flow was off for me . . . but, maybe it's just me.

Nonetheless, beautiful poem.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Overall this was a good poem. The flow was off a bit.
Other than that it was good.
Beautifful poem.

Keep it up 5/5

:Sarah: