So long yet so lovely. this poem was excellent again. you have such talent. in every poem you write. it just flows well.

5/5 David

Who broke my Goran s heart again? let me know so i can teach her respect, hahaha
joonam it is so sad, I cried. seems like it is not a poem but your speaking to a person.
well done

Written with such love and loads of sorrow. Though the heart will ache for now in time all pain including the heartaches will seem as though it was a million years ago.

I hope that you find happiness in your ventures. Stay strong babe.

--Sher

This poem was really long and beautifully written you explained so much in this and showed us the readers how much emotion you feel on this topic. This poem has much beautiful sorrow and straight from the heart. I liked how you made this poem speak as if you were talking to someone. Great work yet again from you. amazing write even better read. Well done Goran~mel
5/5

"Many times
I have told my heart
To leave you alone.
So you cannot be bothered again.
But my poor heart refused to listen,"
i like tis line bc its just like my heart, u tell it to leave that person but it wont listen to you. why is that? maybe because it is too fragil and it cares too much or maybe just a soft heart. what can we do right? well dast xosh its nice. 5/5

Hello
just like u said, u are in the mood of writing which is good, i loved this poem, it is as though u are talking to that person, its rather like a letter with a touch of poetry, which makes it more beautiful and hearthfelt. u are indeed romantic and i think u have a gift...........
take care and hope to see more poem....

Goran,

A beautifully penned piece. A couple tweaks needed:

So do me (So do I)

It is my everyday life
since that moment my heart saw you,
I wish it never did
because,
Those years
deserved to spend with joy.(deserved to be spent with joy)

Yet I have no complain, (Yet, I have no complaint)
As it was my own chosen path.

Many times you hurt me
Yet
Like the weaves of the sea (Like the waves of the sea)
I never gave up

Besides the minor grammatical errors, you did an excellent job. The piece is full of emotion & uniquely structured. Your heartache pours from the page.....

Really long. But i like it alot. you did a great job on writing it. 5/5. take care!

~Chelsea

Truely a greatly written peice of poetry from a truely great poet. The flow was great. Although I felt the structure wasn't too good, perhaps breaking it up into 2 poems, like a series would help. Once again great Job. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

WOW goran where do you get this words from? full of emotions,
Goran, you have the talent of making people fall for your words because they cannot find better poems anywhere, you are so good writing your feelings down on paper. keep it up body.

This is another wonderful piece. It was long but really nice. Another wonderfully penned piece from you. Good job.5/5

Kalee

Wow, i think i said that word about fifteen times throughout that poem... now THAT was good! that was one of your best lately, which is saying a lot since they all make my heart skip. that was AMAZING!!! 5/5 as always, nothing other than that. i was put on that best love poems thing where it's the best poems of the site, Pages of Lost Memories was put on there, so i was really happy about that. i think it's off now, but idc, it was on there before, they notified me at least. and i have a new poem, check it out if you like!!! talk to you later, again wonderful job, and you're wrong, i'm not the best poet on here, you are! o and congrats on the new book if i didn't say it before!

Goran tht was soo awsome!! luved it!! awsomers..beautiful poem....no wonder you hav fans lol..this poem i can relate soo badly i think i could have tears springing through mi eyes... great job =D

Oh my gosh, Goran this is so amamzing. You are going straight to my favourites! This is so wonderful, so heartfelt. I felt my heart get drawn down to my stomach.
I loved the way you structured this poem, everything seemed to come together. I espcially loved the line "Still full of respect for you.
As you were my poor heart's choice"
Amazing, "my heart's choice" You completely explained love in that sentence. How you can't choose who you love, it's your feelings that take control and not your mind. Great job, I loved it, 5/5!!

Alissa

AWww, another sad but wonderful poem! The ending , Have a nice life, just really made the ending better. I just completely made the poem end just right. Keep up teh great work! God Bless 5/5
<3Tayyy

Dear Mr. Goran,
this poem made me cry because you are taking out the words right from your poor heart.
I love your words, they are speaking to me and teaches me of how to be strong and not be afraid of loses in life. You are my great teacher Goran.

Wow, this poem was breath taking, it was beautiful in ever way, i was like wow this guy loves with all his heart...now if only i could find love like that, i love your writing it is absaloutly amazing, this has to be my favorite so far

i loved this part:
I will not turn around
I will not give you another chance.

Brittany (MD)

Very heartbreaking read....

But my poor heart refused to listen,
As
Your picture was
The source of its life.
Yet my heart
Just got tears in return.

Sad a love that isn't returned....hope tomorrow brings some sunshine into your life....well done Goran...very emotional ....

This was an awsome peice man. really heart felt. i can relate alot on not being able to let some one go. i love the stanza about england.
gets a 5 in my book.

Wow this poem was so very long but it also sounded so sincere. I loved the lay out of it all, and never once in the entire thing did I get bored or get the sudden urge to close it.. it held my interest till the end. Lovely job, each line and every word was amazing and well picked. Excellent job, thanx for sharing this with us all.