by CarissalRADIOFACEl Apr 10, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
What's the difference between evil and cynical? |
by Mezmeryz
Wow this was very strong and well said! a meaningful, very powerful write! |
Interesting poem. I loved reading it. Once again... I completely agree with your point. |
Personally, I enjoyed this piece and I thought the message was good, but sometimes it seemed like you were straying from the topic you were writing about. Also, the flow was a little bit staccato and off, but for the most part, good job! keep it up! |