by AlaSkA Apr 10, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Charlatan. |
by Marc Ortiz
Well this is a unique poem, It's really good to read something different now :) I think it flowed well, you have some errors.. but it's nothing big xD |
by Goran Rahim
Another different type of poem by you, im just wondering how u come up with these great ideas.lol |
You remind me a lot of ee cummings... one of my favs. well done... i like it, it's different |
by Vanessa
Now this was diffrent, Way diffrent than any poem I have ever read on this site. I liked it. It intrigued me. The word choice keept my intrest |
Wow.. i really enjoyed reading this poem... written with such simple words and scattered thoughts but still the power and poetic sense it gives is wonderful,.. also if its not to much to ask i would really like to know what this poem means to you.. it seems that there is a lot more to it than what is on the surface.. but i cant seem to find it? message me if you dont mind? |