I love how you have your own unique style of writing
good job

brittany (MD)

Again, I agree with both of them...Stanzas really do help poems flow and for readers to better understan them...But at the same time, you have a unique style of writting which is also good to have...5/5

I dont know why i liked this so much, I'm so used to reading set rhyme schemes, and this is completely different, it was a welcome change though. Favorite part was the wondering about the penguins, i have thought that before.

Writing about dreams makes for a good read, i enjoyed it. thanks for sharing

Very good never read anything like it very different but great well done5-5

Wow.. i really enjoyed reading this poem... written with such simple words and scattered thoughts but still the power and poetic sense it gives is wonderful,.. also if its not to much to ask i would really like to know what this poem means to you.. it seems that there is a lot more to it than what is on the surface.. but i cant seem to find it? message me if you dont mind?
:]P

Now this was diffrent, Way diffrent than any poem I have ever read on this site. I liked it. It intrigued me. The word choice keept my intrest
The vivid descrptions played games with my mind. You did an excellent job. I like your style 5/5

You remind me a lot of ee cummings... one of my favs. well done... i like it, it's different

Another different type of poem by you, im just wondering how u come up with these great ideas.lol

I think soon you will have more readers than me because when i had the same amount of poems that u have now, i never had that much readers...........lol
keep it up dude.

Well this is a unique poem, It's really good to read something different now :) I think it flowed well, you have some errors.. but it's nothing big xD

Just capitalize all the I's =)