Awhh, that was really sweet. And although I felt it would be slightly better with a rhyme scheme it was excellent that you didn't use one. The flow was good, the descriptionss well done, and the emotion clear. I think you could ahve used a few more complex words to make it more exciting but you did well. For example, try chanigng the word "night" to something more unusual. Nicely done though hun, 5/5

Aww, this was wonderful darling. Excellent.
The Angel of Secrets

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"Embrace me
Under the glimmering stars of the night
I gaze up at them while you hold me near
Stroking my hair, kissing my cheek
Whispering sweet nothings in my ear"

Awwwness.. i love that feeling. When the stars are in the sky and he's whispering to you.. it feels so safe

The emotion in this piece is outstanding and i loved the repetiton of the title at the start of every stanza. It really set the tone of the poem.
Brilliant piece
5/5
*gem*

Oh such a beautiful poem tammie. i loved it completely. it all flowed well and the love present in it was amazing!

5/5 David

Wow, what a beautiful poem! I loved the flow and consistency of it. What a wonderful poem. Now I feel all warm and fuzzy. ^.^

<3

Embrace me
Hold me like there's no tomorrow
As though nothing else matters
So that all my worries disappear
Into the endless midnight sky

^^Beautiful line..i just loved it!!
excellent write n it;'s even beautiful n meaningful coz of the dedication......filled with passion n intense feeling-Love........superb peice!!

Kp writing!!
5/5!=)

xxPoojaxx

Another beautiful poem.. very sweet.. i love how in the end you say that when this love embraces you you will be forever theirs.. wonderfully worded... the flow is nice and repeating embrace me really captures the mood you are trying to come across.. keep up the great work :D