This World Only Judges

Oh, i can really relate to this poem, it has so much emotion, luved the line:"I pray you will take this well
I beg you not to cry
Who I am
Is not a choice
Rather a destiny I have finally found"

I really loved the meaning you portrayed behind this poem it was really nice. I think written wise it needs a bit of work though like some words were to much when added together such as utterly eternal and i didnt find any suspense in this poem because the title gave it away. The format was kind of un-neat because the lines were all different lengths. I found the emotion in this poem to be great. Really loved it though. And good on you for telling people this. Really brave. ~mel

Have you showed this to your mother? Does she know yet? If you haven't and she doesn't, I think you should show her. This is a sincere poem and if she truly loves you, she will understand. Or try to, anyway. Good luck to you. Hope all turns out well.

-TonyTRADEMARK

Wow. This poem holds so many emotions, and they're all so in your face, it's amazing. The anxiety, and the bravery... Beautiful. Lovely work.