So There Once was a Girl

by Andrew   Apr 10, 2007


So there once was a girl.
Who was ever so sweet.
Her personality was the best.
One that could never be beat.

She was oh so beautiful.
She could never look bad.
She was the perfect girl.
One you could take home to mom and dad.

Her voice was so soft.
And sometimes she was shy.
She had such a pretty smile.
Gosh i wished i was her guy.

She had never done anything bad.
She was always so good.
When she accepted to be my girl.
I almost mis-understood.

I thought how could this be.
I have the best girl.
She made me so happy.
She changed my whole world.

As time passed by.
She became even more pretty.
We were so much alike.
I was glad she was with me.

So there once was a girl.
I thought everything of her.
She left me and moved on so fast.
So why do I still love her.

So there once was a girl.
Yea, she broke my heart.
Yet I'm still writing about her.
Even though we are now world's apart.

All I ask is if you can please rate my poem...you don't even have to be a member of the site to be able to rate it...thanks for your support!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sammie Jo

    Such a beautiful poem.. .It's really good... and sad

  • 17 years ago

    by Sammie Jo

    Such a beautiful poem.. .It's really good... and sad

  • 17 years ago

    by Sammie Jo

    Wow, this is truly a remarkable poem... It's sweet, and it tells a story, good work!!! ~Sam~

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Simple vocabulary, but it held a lot of meaning . Filled with emotion . Makes me wonder ... ;P The flow was good, and the rhyming too . I don`t have much negative to say about it .
    Nicely done .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by Jamie Lorraine

    I was just wondering has this really happened to you? b/c it sounds like it anyways i love it. filled w/emtion, and love it was great

    Jamie