Is this the poem that you were telling me about?
Cos it raises a lot of questions to me and has one helluva powerful message to the reader
Loving the rhyme scheme sweets!
5/5
*Gem*

What emotion!
"We talk of our pain,
How we aren't good enough,
How no ones ever satisfied,
And how we try so hard."

These lines are ones I can relate to most. 5/5

Wow 5/5

Hey this was really good. very powerful great job expressing urself xx

Wow, this is alright, i'd give it a 99/5. lol. thanx bye.

Awesome job i really like the meaning