by Tammie
I can relate to this poem alot hun. Sometimes we change, and this seems like you are realising that you are. A good flowing poem, the rhyming natural. Awesome job. 5/5 =] |
by Stephanie
Wow. |
I love the way that on the third stanza you use repetition it really add that extra something to this poem. |
I can relate to your words, to understand the true mining of the poem, and I like it a lot. 5/5 |