Comments : Find the old me

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    I can relate to this poem alot hun. Sometimes we change, and this seems like you are realising that you are. A good flowing poem, the rhyming natural. Awesome job. 5/5 =]

    Tammie xo

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow.
    Amazing. The vivid descriptions were amazing, the flow was flawless, and emotions were strong and clear.
    This poem hit me hard. Mostly, because over the last year I have changed so much, I don't even remember who I used to be & sometimes I don't know what to do, I feel lost.
    Wonderful poem, that I'm sure many, including me can relate to! =] 5/5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I love the way that on the third stanza you use repetition it really add that extra something to this poem.

    xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I can relate to your words, to understand the true mining of the poem, and I like it a lot. 5/5