Comments : A heartbeat from me

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Very cute, excellent word usage and rhythm
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Neo Castelino

    Wow ...amazing work...have added u to my favorites..

    Neo.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    "There I will stay day and night
    fill you with happiness and love so bright.
    I will watch over you from heaven above
    blessing your soul and shower you love."
    These words touched my heart so deep
    that I lost all my sleep.
    I realized that you will be
    a never ending heartbeat from me.
    VERY GOOD JOB, I LOVED IT ,GREAT WORK,,,,,5/5