by Dead Inside Apr 10, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Before reading this please realize that this is a mini novel and not a poem. If you have any pioneers or something please don't hesitate to inform me. Thanks. |
A brilliant story it left me wanting to read more and more of it. Honestly if you ever get it published id definately buy a copy! ;) |
by CHOKE
Lol, i don't "OWN" the style; so of course you can right a poem like it love. :) |
by Vanessa
Wow. I am in awe. that was just amazing. You have a deep and natural talent, don't let it go to waste. I was carried away by the emtion ij this peice, it was very well written. keep up the excellent work. Thanks for the comments |
by Br0k3n
" At one moment you could be happy, with the one you love, living life to the fullest when suddenly life throws you pain after pain and you find yourself sobbing in the darkness, bleeding alone, wondering where it all went wrong. You find yourself living life on the sidelines, watching people live without really being alive yourself. And that's when you realize that your only real friends are the tears; the tears that keep you company on those dark, solemn nights, when you feel like a razor-blade to the wrist is the only way out." |