Ben
Wow what a poem. Excellent job. Very descrptive. Flow and rhyme were great.

Why has your cosmic journey brought you here to me.
Hard to believe a shooting star shall decide man's destiny.

This stanza really got me. I love to read your work.
Take care Love Cindy

Great poem so nicely written 5-5

Well written with excellent word choices and rhyme.....awesome as usual. 5/5 Debbie

This is indeed an outstanding poem. Your skill of rhyming always surprises me, i find this pattern which you follow the toughest one but you just make it flow so moothly.

great write indeed

all the best and take care

Very good poem, I really enjoyed this. Keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace