Ben
What a vivid descrption of what hell would be like. The way you penned this piece all you have to dois close your eyes and invision yourself being there. Not something I want to do....lol

Visage of holy light.
Lost in abysmal expanse.
Satan awaits pure souls.
Death's ancient eternal dance.

Excellent job!
Keep up the wonderful writing.
Love Cindy

Excellent Poem I loved it, you can picture in your mind exactly what you reading-keep up the good work.

Great dark poem once again. excellent imagery and word choices....5/5 Debbie

When i joined this site, i was only able to write dark poems, but i am glad that you were not posting at that moment, otherwise i still would have been running for some identity... :o))

you are really a very talented DARK POET

all the best and take care