I can totally relate to this poem! I know exactly how you feel, except for the part where the person actually looks at you, cuz the guy I like won't give me the time of day. Anyway, good job! 5/5

Thinks for your comment.
and keep trying to get him to look at you.

Because your beautiful. and nothing can change that. your a very expressive writer. keep it up and you'l go far.

Think you for your all your support.