thanks 4 the coments, this isnt really about anyone. i kinda made it up

This poem has hit mee like bricks for it has happened to me....only thing is i lived

this poem is really good, and my sympathys for u Elizabeth East best luck to you all, keep writing amy xxx

that was awesome....

ur poem is really beautiful. i was deeply touched by it and it is one of the best poems i've read in a long time. great job...

All i can say is AMAZING! that was a great poem! keep writing!

3 letters..one word...w-o-w...i can relate to most of it..and...just keep writing you have a talent. You know how to capture the reader and get your point across. Keep writing.

-mel-

aww that poem was soo good it made me cry! it was soo sad! keep wriitng and keep up the good work! dont let anything bring u down! xoxo brittany

That's a really touching poem... I loved it so much! It's so sad that this happens to people. I konw it didnt happen to you but my heart pours out to those it does happen to!
Love Sarah
Xoxo

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Dat waz gd:) dats how i am 2 b honest wit u.i hide da pain...

Thats an excellent poem, keep writing. take kare x x x