Your Love...
by SexyGirl101akaJess Apr 10, 2007
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Your love is like the sunshine releasing rays of light to guide me through this temporal world. Your with me in my dreams day and night. so I'll never fear the storms of life, that each of us must face, Your love will rend the darkest cloud, and see me through with grace. |
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17 years ago
Kji
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17 years ago
Thanks how sweet
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17 years ago
by DeathlyAmore
Oh!!!
Your a free write poet! ^_^ I have not met a free write poet in over ages now.
There a bit harder to critique because they were your emotions just written down.
Well, Since this a free write poem, I can only judge it based on the, Title, vocabulary, and grammar.
The title matches the poem perfectly, and the poem does not go off topic.
Your vocabulary is basic. Anyone can guess those words on top of their head. But you have not written many so that does not matter yet.
Your grammar is is good. I do not see any spelling mistakes, no punctuation mistakes.
So... based on this. I have to say to all those idiots who voted 3.0 to slap themselves. They are horrible. They should learn to except "ALL" poetry. Even free write.
Based on that of what I written above, I give you a 5. I should give you a 4. But your vocabulary can increase over time. So I'll let that go.
I will give you a 5.
I voted 5/5
[Ps: WRITE MORE]
