Memories

by Israfel   Apr 10, 2007


A memory is a reminder
of something long ago
Sometimes they are sad
But still the sadness doesn't show
Sometimes they are happy
like the first snowfall in December
Things you didn't want to forget
Things you can't bear to remember

((Note: This was, I'm pretty sure, the first poem I ever wrote. Er...maybe I'm forgeting some. Anyways, I wrote this when I was eight and since it was during class I got in trouble. My teacher took it from me and then asked to see me after class. I thought I was in trouble but instead she told me about a poetry contest. The prize was the opportunity to get a poem published. At first I wasn't going to but my parents made me and I ended up getting it published. Its not very good but it was my first attempt at a poem.))

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  • 17 years ago

    by Allanon

    Thats ok. everyone has to start somewhere. its a great poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    For an 8-year-old, it was actually good. Something about it was sweet-sad, yet sweet. True not as great as it can be now but still nice especially when the age is factored in.
    ~Faith-less

  • 17 years ago

    by eternalxxpromise

    Omg, i love it.
    its actually awesome for an eight year old, and as a first poem, its pretty good. :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Nikki

    I really liked it, it was cute and sad. 5/5