Grime

by Juice   Apr 10, 2007


We know there are always gonna be people out on the grind. but why should we tell them weather they are to shine. when people look down on you like infestuis grime. the youths mind set is money money money. so they cut class and end up a paid dummy dummy dummy. We either live dumb or die the same way. and we don't really care what people say. we do it from sun up to sun down until we get paid. and for some maybe even until we get laid. then comes that big problem we call aids do u realize we got people passing away. at increasing rate every day. I say we change invest in a future life. and start Doing what we know is right. man its spring cleaning so we know its time. to clean up our lives and stop living in grime

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  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    This poem has alot of valid points.

    "the youths mind set is money money money"

    That seems to be all alot of people care about these days, money. I liked how you used repition of the word money it re-inforces the fact that it is such a large factor in youths lives today. We need to look past money because it definetly does not bring true happiness. Great write :]

    All the best,
    Bonnie

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, I enojoyed it, keep up the good work.

    PS. Plz rate and comment some of my poems.