Very good poem, I enojoyed it, keep up the good work.

PS. Plz rate and comment some of my poems.

This poem has alot of valid points.

"the youths mind set is money money money"

That seems to be all alot of people care about these days, money. I liked how you used repition of the word money it re-inforces the fact that it is such a large factor in youths lives today. We need to look past money because it definetly does not bring true happiness. Great write :]

All the best,
Bonnie