Okay.
There's nothing bad to say about this poem.
It's uh-maze-zing.
I can even hear the drums in my hand.
I've been commenting people a lot.
This has been the first time today
Where I didn't say anything bad.
Nice job :]

The poem itself seems like alot of ranting. But wait young one. between the lines of pain I saw a defined pattern that worked well with you. It is good that you have that much passion and now have that much control over it very well done Plot121