Haha. i liked he whole thing. i was gunna chose my favorite par in here, but decided this was all too good. good job. keep up the good work.<3

Hehe. I liked this.

Oh, and as you may may not have noticed. It was locked. ><

So if you would still like to contnue let me know. I'll see what happens. I sent a message to poetic as well. I'll just wait for the replies, and then go from there.

That was a great poem I really liked it and keep up the great work Plot121