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  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    ThiS poeM iS besT, sO whY i shoulD gO foR thE 2nD besT? lovelY writinGs..... besT oF lucK anD wheN timE permitS i wilL reaD yR otheR poemS.... thankS.

    luzaN

  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    I like it.
    good job.
    I like poems with a kind of repetition
    gets the point across
    lovely
    xx