Comments : A Collapsing Fall

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, I enojoyed it, keep up the good work.

    PS. Plz rate and comment some of my poems.

  • 17 years ago

    by DaNgErOuS EnTiCeMeNt

    Umm... can't say that i understood it but the words were pretty!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    I agree with Wallace. That was so good, and i also enjoyed it.... keep writing!!! ... 5/5 from me, and thank ya for the comments haha