I found this poem to be really creative the imagery was great. i loved your vocab you made a truely beautiful poem here well done with this ~mel

This poem is really good man, im loving the vocabulary, and it seems to fall in a catagory close to mine. im into unique/expeiramental poetry.
cheers.

Your imagery is point blank rather than elusive. But, what I enjoy is that your poems have double meaning to them and subliminal messages of a sort. Or, so it seems to me. Keep it up, mate.