Comments : Second Best

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Hey hun very emotional write. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    This one is so close to what I wrote yesterday. My heart is breaking and I don't know what to do.
    I'll keep writing I guess.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gem
    This is really sad...Excellent job on the write. Losing someone we love is always a hard thing on the heart.

    Without you here
    I don't feel complete
    Everything about me
    Is now obsolete

    This stanza was very touching.
    Take care
    Love Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Man this is a cool poem. I see why you are so many favorite authors. Great job. 5/5
    -vino

  • 17 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    This is good 5/5 i like the way you put the rhyming. great ending