Wow, dear, this is truly another amazing poem with a great picture created........
I hope you see that day and i hope all of your dreams come true as you are a nice person and you deserve the best in life. you have showed your greatest talent once again... keep it up cause i need your poems to tiz my heart ,lol.

Awww!! This is wonderful! You did an amazing job!

Wow that was touching. The flow was flawless the word choice brillant,the emtions were strong. powerful write. 5/5

Omg that is so sweet. 5/5!!!!!

Wow... ur poem flows so good.... i liked it! good job

Wow i love how the verses are short but sweet and how the words flow so well, you are a truly amazing writer,

5/5
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