Congratulations winning the club to club contest!
Beautiful words from a beautiful mind and heart. You never cease to amaze me with your brilliant word choice, rhyme and flow. Excellent job onece again!

I totally agree with Rachel....
You say beautiful words, you have a beautiful mind and heart.........
You never cease to amaze me with your brilliance....... I could go on.........

Now to the poem.....
wonderful but I am totally biased

I am captured by the cascade of fluttering symphony of words you write, wishing I were the sunb that my eyes close in the Soft bright Summer breezes that blow.....your words enchant.......totally

Its beautiful, simply loved it.Flow, usage of words everything fits in so well.

Debbie
What a beautiful poem of love. What a wonderful use of words and imagery.

Soft bright Summer breezes blow
Blossom's splendid gala shows
Enticing fire does passion send
Where I end and you begin

I loved this stanza. It gives you a warm feeling after reading:)
Love you Cindy

OHHHH total niceness 5/5 you make our club rock

Hey Deb. this is so nice. Often we get lost and forget where we end and "you" begin.
I think this one verse says it all:

Soft bright Summer breezes blow
Blossom's splendid gala shows
Enticing fire does passion send
Where I end and you begin

--Sher

What a nice journey into the seasons. A wonderful creation and its great news to hear that it won the contest. You deserved it.
Congratulations.

Beautiful (I bet you hear that a lot, lol)
I hear that it won as well! That's great! It really deserved to.
The title was great and you really did the words justice.
Well done m'dear
5/5
*Gem*

Love blessed Spring caresses day
Slumber's shadows break away
My heart beats once, then once again
Where I end and you begin

this is so beautiful, loved it right from the first stanza till the last one, beuatiful poem indeed

all the best and take care

I know my comment is late, but Congrats on winning the contest!! You deserved it!! This was a beautiful write. I loved the idea with the seasons and the stuff. Yeah, I dunno what I'm saying anymore, lol. Amazing poem. Never stop! 5/5

` Liz =]

Comment #3~
Wow! I don't even know what to say. I mean a lot of ppl have written poems about the changing seasons, whether it has to do with love or just nature, but this is the best one I've seen. Great, great job! And congrats on placing in the contest, sry it took so long to comment. Thanks for being so patient! :)
~Midnight Sun

How charming this piece is, Ms. Debbie! I was rendered speechless by the bravura vividness of this versatile composition of yours.
I'm encanted tremendously.
Love,
Debbie

Magnificent