MEGAN. Yrrbby ;] I love this. It flowed really well & was just so damn sweet! Hehe :) I KNOW WHO IT'S ABOUT. GO ME!! This was just absolutely beautiful, m'dear.

We had our ups and downs our moments in time.
^ that line kinda made me stumble. Idk. It kinda doesn't make sense to me. I think that it should be 'We had our ups and downs, our moments in time.' Or 'We had our ups and downs; our moments in time.'

Maybe I'm wrong, lol. But, overall: Amazingly beautifully penned.

Ily. & him :]

Bri [x]

Great poem, shows how much you love that person. Keep it up!

This is a sweet poem. The love was shown.

I liked the way you structired it.
Beautifully written. 5/5

:Sarah:

What a noble poem. He's a lucky man! Great write.

Hey
so sweet =) i love the poem, i can tell that you love him and he is lucky to have you ;)

I especialy like this line:
We had our ups and downs our moments in time.

kisses stephanie

Loved it !!=))