Passed Us By.

by Teria   Apr 11, 2007


Passed Us By.

Another year of change
has slowly passed us by.
Another year of deaths
has caused the earth to cry.
Another year memories
have filled our lonely minds.
Another year of sorrows
make it hard to find..

Find the place within our hearts
that we can call our own.
Find the place within our soul,
that is still not shown.
Find the place within world
that we have fantasized.
Find the place within this earth
that has slowly minimized..

Minimized the love we give
that causes us to grow.
Minimized the faith we have
that we rarely even show
Minimized the tears we shed
that cause our eyes to cry.
Minimized the life we had
that slowly passed us by.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Ahhh. Now THIS is a poem. D*mn straight. =]

    First, and only complaint: use punctuation. It helps the flow of the poem greatly. And it makes the meaning stick out more.

    Now. I LOVED the meaning. It's beautiful and yet so true. The flow was actually very good . . . over all, THIS is your best.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5