Where are you going, where have you been?

by Raye   Apr 11, 2007


If I were to go with you,
I would not be free.
You suffocate me.
You control me.

If I were to go with you,
My life would be still.
Like a flower I will die in winter time.
I cant breathe.
I cant dream.
I cant be me.

If I were to go with you,
My eyes would go dark.
My mind would be blank.
My skin would turn to rubber.
My blood would go cold.
My smile would never shine.

If I were to go with you,
I would never live again.
Never to breathe again..

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    This is a good poem...i like the flower part..but in my oppion add a lil imagery in there and it would b perfect

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

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