Spring

I really liked this and for your first time its preaty good. What I like about it most was how different it is than most things on this site. Now normally I wouldn't like this kind of thing because of its lack of metaphores etc but in this case I thought it was very refreshing. You kept it very simple, direct, and short. And the thing I loved the most about this poem was that you knew when to end it. You didnt start rambling on about things that didnt matter. Nice work. 5/5

It's pretty good if it was your first time
Writing a spring poem.
But it was uninteresting that
You just listed a whole bunch of stuff
That came up at the word spring.
There's no flow.
Just completely randomness.
Maybe that's what makes it poetic...

The words flow so effortlessly! nature is sometimes hard to capture and turn into words but you've portrayed spring wonderfully.

This is a great poem. It creates a good picture. well done. 5/5

~Chelsea

AWWW you make me WANT summer REALLY BAD!! lol anyway your poem is soooo simple and yet it lets the readers see it themselves good job!! keep up with the writing. cause you are a talented writer and dont forget that! :) 5/5