I never read a poem like this, but I must say I enjoyed it. I'm assuming in the poem that it's sort of a poem to yourself not somone else, and I liked that. Everyone has secret insecurities and this is a poem that most will be able to relate to. I really liked this style of writting, and I may try it myself! Thanks so much for writting different styles insted of the same old, same old. 5/5

Well...another good read...it kind've is depressing though...especially if you were feeling bad about yourself at the moment...but once again the rhyme scheme was awesome and the form made it a more interesting read...you have real talent
Jonda Beth

For some reason.. I thought of Avril Lavgine.

Mkay.
I liked it, a lot.
You used the world crawl in the firs two stanzas, and I hate that word as it is, let alone twice in a poem. :/
But, the poem was fun to read.
It like captivated me. Lol.
And, you did a great job with the first line in each stanza, loved all three of them. :]
I don't think I could do it, especially that well. Lol.

You did a great job.
Keep it up. :]

Again, this is a nice style to write in, and you have great vocabulary. It's very colorful and makes for wonderful poetry. Keep up the good work!

With your work it always amazes me to see the stanzas played out it is good you are so disiplined to do your work like this. I have always found it hard to be in such boarders but you do it well I gave you a 5 Plot121

I really liked this poem it seemed to be based on anger and sometimes angry poems are the best to read. And the title makes me laugh as soon as I finished reading this one. No wonder she's a mess of insecurities I mean when she's being described like that. The only thing I didnt like was the repeating lines. Other than that nice job.

I loved this. I don't know how it is just a 4.9, it should be a 5, lol. Everything about this poem was great, the imagery, the word choice...everything!

"You are far away from perfect --
That's putting it nicely,
You are far from being worth it,"

^^ I loved those lines, they really stuck out to me. I felt like I could feel your anger lol. Good job, Hun.

5.5
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