Ahh a wonderful thing that you portrayed in this poem, that even the wisest of people (In this case the moon) somtimes can't amount to the wisdom of a little girl. Wonderfuly written, again I like the different style of the poem. The imagry was a bit fuzzy and I can't say as I exactly felt like I was there, but the topic came accross crystal clear.

Oooo...that was awesome and it kept my interest even though it was long...i liked how it kind've reminded me of a fairy tell type read...i absolutely loved it and the rhyme scheme was great...
Jonda Beth

Haha, I know that you know that I already love this poem lol, but I love it so much that I had to come here and nominate it. Tehee. This truly is an amazing piece of work, and I absolutely adore it. I read it over and over again and I've really fallen in love with it lol. Great job Darling!

heartchuu.

"Now do you see clearly, Mr. Sky?"
"All you have do to is start low,
"Gather all your strength and all your might
And hold on to hope; you can fly!"

^ That stanza, the quotation marks are not correct.

I really liked this poem. It had a beat going to it, and I love poems like that.
And, I loved the ending [last two stanzas].

I also liked how you used sighed, and anceint over and over. I usually dislike when words are overused. But, it went well with the poem.

Great Job.
5/5

I enjoyed it, the rhyme scheme was quite unique. It didn't ramble on as a lot of long poems do but stayed to the point. I feel that a lot of long poems are unnecessarily so but not this one. Flowed quite well.

Congrats on winning the weekly contest! Well done! All the best, Debbie

Congrats on your win :)

I love your poem! Something about it made me con't to read. I can't always finish a poem but this one somehow got deep down inside me and made me think.
Great Job!!
-Crystal<3

Beautiful.....i love it!!!!

Beautiful.....i love it!!!!

Awsome

Amazing poem. 5/5... It's inspiring and it's really easy to imagine the conversation described.

Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Great

This poem was excellent.it was so touching.amazing the flow was good too.it was unique from all the others.
best wishes
and take care.

Did not like it sorry but still good

That is really neat, it's different from what i have read!! i would give u a 5!!! keep up the good work!

And great job for winning!!!!!!