Untitled....not sure what to title it

by ChevyCowgirl23   Apr 11, 2007


One by one
her tears escape
her bright red eyes
the mask that hides
the life she once lived
was begining to fade
the real person she was
has began to show
her problems were
all begining to show
she walked witht he
world around her
she had realized
life was going to be hard
she wasn't living a life
that would be happy anymore
she was going to be facing times
that was going to take more than a friend to deal with
as one by one
her tears escape

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  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Oh well done. i suggest that you title it my struggle.

    yet thats only me. thats wat came to mind. 5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by TotaMariee

    How bout calling it "forever falling tears"?

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