Comments : I Was Reminded

  • 17 years ago

    by Marina

    As we stand here now
    I am reminded of all the reasons why I hate you
    Your smile,
    and the way it confuses me
    Your laugh,
    and the way it seems to mock me
    Your eyes,
    and the way they can look into mine and not feel a thing

    is the best part about it... great way to end the poem... LOVELY FLOW... supoer good... 5/5
    -Marina.