He Makes Me...

I loved this poem.

"He makes me so sad
He' always so busy
I always knew that about him
He can't always be there for me"
^^this stanza didn't make much sense to me. Maybe because it had some mistakes or missing words. It flowed very nice though. 4/5

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Great poem. I like the change between sad and happy.

And u said you weren't in any way a poet, i think not! you are a wonderful writter and use the perfect words for your pieces, again well done and great job xox lithium.

Do you know any relation without tides like these? I dont think so. We all have relations in which there are happy moments and reasons to breakdown. Just keep flowing dear, life has so much to offer.

beautiful poem once again

all the best and take care

This was excellent. it was great to see how you set it out. how it was amazingly perfect.

5/5 David